Below is an example of how your tutor might give feedback on your work. This particular assignment is from our Magazine Journalism module on writing openers (courtesy of our student, Megan). Most of our tutors use MS Word's editing function ('Track changes'), and they insert comments.
Different tutors provide different amounts of feedback and have different coaching styles. Each student will elicit a different response from their tutor and it is up to the student to request more feedback (or less) if required.