2016 SA Writers College Short Story Competition Third Place


'The High Road Less Travelled' - by Les Hellmann



Namaqualand is a place where time moves in circles. Slow circles. Life is not easy there, but you can always catch up when you fall behind in Namaqualand, or you can wait until the cycle comes around to you again. In Namaqualand strange is normal and normal is easy going. There is nothing strange in seeing a white man and a brown man travelling together on dusty roads over ancient mountains.
Bradley was a white man. He looked as if he belonged behind the wheel of his Lexus RX350. His clothes were ordered online from designer websites around the world. He booked air-tickets online. He did everything online. He would go for his haircut online if he could. His Lexus was more of a mobile office than a car — an expensive computer on expensive wheels. He could Link-In, Facebook, Tweet, Blog, Google and whatever from his installed optional extra computer system. There was also a satellite-phone, plasma screen TV in the back seat, GPS, Tracker and surround sound for the iPod.
No one called Bradley, Brad, except for his friends. In other words no one called him Brad. He did, however, have one thousand two hundred and forty three Facebook Friends. And he was Linked In all over the world. Even places like Uzbekistan, Guam and Anchorage, Alaska.
Bradley was very bright, but his brain was linked directly to his computer — it totally bypassed his heart, which was kept in sync by a pacemaker. Comparing humans to computers, Bradley would be the equivalent of a pocket calculator with no scientific functions. Can you remember those — not a calculator that is part of a phone, camera, telescopic rifle or card-key - but a stand-alone job? Bradley was not a fully functioning human.
Abram was a brown man. He was a Namaqua born and bred. His ancestors were painting pictures on cave walls long before time was trapped and held captive in digital cages of minutes and seconds. Cell phone? Abram didn’t even have a party line phone. Hard to have a party line when there is no operator. She was made redundant six or seven summers ago, just after the big flood. Abram had lots of friends in Leliefontein and the surrounding area— but not one Facebook Friend.
The world that Abram lived in was small, but the universe he inhabited was immense. He knew the sun and the moon and the planets, and the stars they moved amongst. He knew about tiny geckos that lived under rocks in sandy places, and the songs of birds.
So, as was mentioned earlier on, it was not strange to see Abram and Bradley travelling along together in Namaqualand.  Their paths had met in no-mans-land between humanity and technology, and were now heading in the same direction for a while.
It was on the dirt road between Platbakkies and Witwater that they became travelling companions. As they say in that part of the world, the one on wheels stops for the one in shoes — if he is lucky enough to have shoes.
There was a half comfortable silence between the two men, the comfortable half being Abram’s half; Bradley was a bit out of his comfort zone. Abram’s eyes took in the familiar mountains and the ochre sand road that wrapped itself gently around the mountains, not intruding on their age-old patience, but making them more inviting, not as forbidding when first seen by explorers centuries ago. Bradley couldn’t really stand all this silence.
‘Where do you live then?’
‘On the mission station at Leliefontein.’
‘What’s a mission station?’ Brad was seriously ignorant about life outside of computers, and Googling was a bit awkward right then. He knew what a mission statement was, but not a mission station.
‘Oh, it is a place where people do the work of God,’ replied Abram.
‘I don’t believe in God.’ Bradley was surprised when he heard himself making this last remark. He had never even thought about whether God existed or not. If it had no logic it didn’t exist on Bradley’s flat-screen earth.
‘A lot of people don’t, and a lot of people do,’ was all that Abram said.
The foggy silence settled over Bradley again, stifling him, while Abram resumed his contemplation of the bright world they were travelling through. They travelled on in this ill-matched silence for a while, and Abram could feel Bradley’s restlessness, but he left him alone with his agitation.
‘Do you have computers on this mission station of yours?’ Bradley asked, simply to bring something he knew into the situation.
‘There is one in the administration office, but I don’t have much use for it’.
‘Ah,’ was all Bradley said.
‘But you do have electricity there, don’t you?’ Bradley asked after his “ah” got no response.
‘Yes,’ laughed Abram, ‘but not all the time, and the phone lines are often down, of course. Telkom is getting tired of replacing stolen wire, so maybe we will not have phones shortly.’
Bradley could not converse without asking questions. “What about cell-phones?” “Well, some people have them, but there’s no coverage in town. Mostly those that have them just want to look fashionable, but if the battery is charged they use them as alarm clocks to wake up in time for work. If they have work.’
‘What do you do at night, or on the weekends?’
‘Oh, I go to church on Sundays. And I write music. Play my guitar, and the church organ and piano.' This surprised Bradley. He could maybe see this weathered man with his felt hat playing a guitar, but not a piano or an organ.  Not that he knew much about the organ, other than it was an old fashioned key-board. As for writing music, well, he would take that with a pinch of salt too. He doubted that this old and wrinkled man could read or write normally, forget about music.
‘Are you any good at this music you play?’
‘The people who listen enjoy it.'
Bradley saw an opening.
‘You know, if you knew more about computers, you could record your songs. You could send them to other people to listen too, and maybe even sell them if you were good enough.’
‘Ah, but the music would be coming out of a box, and not a heart. Isn’t it better to listen to the heart?’ This was a bit too much for Bradley to take in. But he continued with his chain of thought.
‘You can’t really call an iPod or a Blackberry a box, man. Technology has made it possible for music to be carried around in your pocket. Forget about your heart.’
Silence again. For the first time in his life Bradley was finding an irrational sort of comfort in the stillness. But he couldn’t stop the questions from jumping out of his mouth.
‘Are there shops in Leliefontein, then?’
‘There is a trading store where we can get most things, and every now and then we go to Garies to buy what we can’t get at Leliefontein. Garies has a much bigger trading store. But mostly we go to see family and friends. We like to listen to each others’ stories.’
Why does this man never ask me questions, wondered Bradley? At the same time Abram was wondering why this man was so keen to ask questions, yet never offered any information on his own life. Not that he minded, he simply accepted Bradley as a human being and welcomed him into his world, without pressuring him. Maybe if he pointed out some things from his world they could talk, instead of interrogating each other.
He pointed to a dense cluster of pink flowers.

‘That plant is what we call the Kattekruid. The children dance around it sometimes and sing 'kattekruid, kattekruid daar staan die kattekruid, dis ‘n lekker kruid'. They are basically singing that it is a nice plant; but not only does it look nice, for centuries our people have made medicine from it. It is used for heart problems, flu, fever, headaches, liver problems and arthritis. Even for piles,’ Abram laughed. ‘I’m not sure what the English name for it is, but the Latin name is Ballota Africana.’
As Bradley turned his eyes back to the road he saw the picture of the Kattekruid in his mind, but not only the flowers, also the children dancing around them. He could even hear the singing, which freaked him out a bit. Before he would have snapped the picture on his phone or iPad, sent it to a whole pile of contact numbers, where it would have been deleted and forgotten. Now he was living the picture, and he had no physical record of it. He found this strangely exciting.
'Over there, that white-flowered plant is the Kapokbossie, or Eriocephallis Africanus. Its flowers will turn into hairy white seed-balls soon. We use the Kapokbossie for stomach aches. We make up an alcoholic tincture, and a small tot works wonders. Sometimes I think the men pretend they are sick so their wives will give them the medicine. We get a lot of our medicine from the veld here, so we are not worried about having no chemist nearby.’
As Bradley looked towards the Kapokbossie he thought he must be seeing things —  beyond the Kapokbossie was a range of mountains far in the distance, and beyond that a line of blue that almost looked to be part of the sky.
‘That looks like the sea over there,’ he said.
‘It is — it’s the Atlantic Ocean,’ said Abram. ‘I love seeing it from this point. I see not only the vast plain down there, but the ocean that stretches out even further, while the skies reach up beyond my imagination. I see new worlds and ideas out there, just waiting to be shared by others.’
Bradley was feeling a bit dazed. He was being exposed to thoughts that were being generated without the help of computers. He was hearing facts that he couldn’t immediately verify by going on to the internet. The idea that there were free thoughts floating around here was a bit disturbing to him. And all this witch-doctor medicine stuff that Abram was talking about — were there quacks getting rich selling cures that did nothing to primitive people? Mind you, that was what pretty much happened in his world— doctors selling expensive pills that had more side-effects than cures. This thought put him into more of a spin — he didn’t think cynical thoughts.
Bradley was becoming decidedly disorientated. The thought came to him that Abram did not talk as he looked. He knew things, but at the same time he was not interested in computers. Was his world so small that he was unaware of what technology had brought to the world, or what he could do if he learned more about technology ?
They were approaching Leliefontein in the lengthening shadows of sunset. Bradley was warming towards this simple man, something that he had never done before. Had Abram ever been beyond Garies, he wondered.
He plucked up courage, ‘Tell me, Abram, have you ever gone to see what is beyond this small simple world of yours?’ Abram thought a bit before answering.
‘And where did you go?’
‘Grahamstown. Also Cambridge. In England, you know.’
‘Now that is interesting. What were you doing in Cambridge?’
‘Completing my PhD in divinity.’
There was an embarrassed silence as they approached the only B&B in Leliefontein. Abram did nothing to break it. Only when they stopped did he gently turn to Bradley.
‘I have been grateful for this chance to make a new friend Brad, and I hope we will meet again sometime. And remember, there is more to life than technology, amazing though it is. It can let us down at times, you know. But we don’t have to feel helpless without it. Go well.’
Brad felt strangely at peace with himself — no longer embarrassed as the blinkers fell away from his eyes. He climbed down off Abram’s donkey cart and gave the gentle Saartjie a grateful pat on the rump. He would worry about the Lexus and its flat battery tomorrow.




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